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[.x.]I can see who you are...you're TRANSPARENT[.x.]

As I'm witnessing every white lie.
They keep creeping out of your lips.
Attemping to look like you're a doll.
For action, be a whore; you'd strip.

You pretend to be so perfect with glory.
You play that you're a flawless queen.
But you're not tricking me, stupid fool.
Glimpsing right through those lies; between.

You're not as loved as you think you are.
You're not a princess; do you understand?
PLEASE DO LOOK AROUND YOURSELF, SWEETHEART.
I'll make you get it, under my dear command.

Nothing but a white trashy, trampy, whore.
Listen here, because you're bad and errant.
My baby let me tell you something vital.
I can see who you are...you're TRANSPARENT

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Your nothing but a fake.

AND I CAUGHT YOU.

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  • Xetacube
    August 12, 2007
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    very strong work yet again
    really great piece of poetry


  • xxMyBellxx
    August 7, 2007

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    I love your venum, it's so fierce, so cruel and I can relate to this well. I enjoyed this write a lot, not sure the girl you wrote this about would agree !! lol