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Do Your Time

Look What You Done
He showed you love
He gave you his heart.
What do you do?

Rip it apart .
After what you did
I will never forget
The very night it happened

He called and was lost.
You took all he had
And didn’t even admit to your crime
You should have had to pay and do you time.

Till the day you say the truth
I wont tell you one word
You cant say you didn’t know
It was typed out plain as day

Ill never forgive you till you admit your wrong
And take the blame for something that you could have stopped.
He’s my friend and will always be and I won’t stand to see him hurt again
So admit your crime and do your time.

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  • Forget
    August 7, 2007

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    Wow Justin. That was really good, I think like the best thing I've ever read by you. I'm pretty sure I know who/what this is about.
    ^-^ I likie


  • christy22
    August 7, 2007

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    wow i love it you are a good writer hun keep up the good work...this has a lot of meaning in it and i think that is why i like it so much bc you knew what you wanted to say and you put it down on paper and you did well with it i have seen a lot of ppl stumble over their thoughts you dont and that is part of why this is good. another reason is bc you have a lot of courage in it and not many ppl are willing to stand up for their friends...*hugs*


  • Shade Aurelia
    August 6, 2007

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    indeed, no less that what she deserves. She'd best quit lying about everything and grow up. But meh, his life is his own and I'll be as supportive as possible to be.

    Great write, yet again.

    Love forever
    Your Shade