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Laughter Behind Me

Laughter behind me
while the saxophone
touches the poetry within me,
Imminent in a sense
where a soul
is touched
calling me home,
Pages in a lifetime
satisfied only by a muse,
Which whispers secrets
spiraled in a vision,
Entwined in those dreams
which tell me the truth,
Some say that it's madness,
But you tell me who's crazier,
One who lives in this world of reality
forgetting how to have fun,
Or one who doesn't have a care in the world
and makes his dreams reality.

Sept. 24, 2000

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Written January 16th, 2002

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  • sidewinder silver member
    January 16, 2002
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    Well I write the date as I write them.
    Then I go from there.
    I've been writting sence I was 18 yrs. old
    But I've been serious about it the last 6 yrs.
    Thanks for reading !
    And I'm glad you enjoyed it !


  • heinzs silver member
    January 16, 2002
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    Great addition to the collection. I envision these as several to a page... perhaps in chronological order?

  • sidewinder silver member
    January 16, 2002
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    Thank you Ann !
    Glad you enjoyed it !


  • AnnD Moderators member
    January 16, 2002
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    Oh YES!!.........i love it.....

  • sidewinder silver member
    January 16, 2002
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    Thank you CafeAuLait !
    Glad you enjoyed the write !


  • CafeAuLait9185
    January 16, 2002
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    Very nice. Sounds like a dream... Almost reminds me of Dave Matthews, though I'm not quite sure why. I liked this piece very much. :-)

  • sidewinder silver member
    January 16, 2002
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    Thanks !
    Glad you enjoyed the write !

  • steph4uk
    January 16, 2002
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    All I have to say is WOW

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