Without your whisper,
your hands across my heart
tucking me in at night,
your sweet smile
awakening sleepy eyes,
fingers tracing my kiss,
I am lost in shadow
falling out of forever's
fluttering dreams
lashes, butterflies
and Angels weep.
♥
Author notes
"The lonely path to forever "
A contest entry
- Quickie.. by poetsruletheworld.
600 points, ended August 6, 2007, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - pif - Enter your best quickie pre-write by tara wilson.
1200 points, ended September 20, 2007, 36 entries
Honorable mention
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"I am lost in shadow
falling out of forever's
fluttering dreams
lashes, butterflies
and Angels weep."
So sad this is, and a beautiful sad one, too
Thank you for this entry
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I can see why this won the Gold
aah so many poems this am tug at the heart strings,
this truly has a lot of feelings held within it
once again congratulations,
Warm thoughts
Frozentearz
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congrads for gold....
this is really amazing
truly deserved gold....
Tracey
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this is absolutely amazing! i have no chance! amazing job, and great take on the prompt! well done!
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Oh such a beautiful write and the pic just perfect..thanks so much for entering
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This was beautiful...I love the concept and title "Falling out of flutter". Good luck in the contest.
Soulful Woman
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Hello there my friend!
Good luck to you~
Jay
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