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creeping ninja

Hiding in the shadows,
leaping from roof to roof.
Standing behind a tree,
crouching on a post.

Ready to strike,
seeking out movement.
Kunai in my hand,
shuriken ready to glide.

I'm silent,
I'm fast.
I'll attack without warning,
when your guard is down.

I love the dark,
I wear pitch-black.
Hiding in the shadows,
ready to attack.

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  • Kyuutan-megumi
    May 5
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    NINJA!

    COOLNESS!!! I love it!!


  • punkninja113
    April 28, 2008
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    ima ninja. well.. if you wanna get technical i would be a kunoichi. lol. nice poem btw. :]


  • a means to an end
    December 22, 2007

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    W00ts i am so a kunoichi so i know what u mean. i super awesome at glomping people when they least excpect it! lol


  • Angel Lunarious
    October 12, 2007
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    i like this! This was very good!


  • Cari Cullen
    October 2, 2007
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    cool

    That is sweet! I really like it it's very good!


  • Yokashi14
    September 19, 2007
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    Awsome!

    Thats an awsome poem! It has very good flow and rythem. Good job!


  • TokyoMewMewIchigo
    August 26, 2007
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    Ninja

    That is cool lovely Poetry. very nice very good.I love it.

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