Mother Nature emptied
her finest paints today,
the whites, golds, and silvers
are the ones on display.
The crystal angels falling
Are snow-white with perfection
Each one a glistening diamond
They melt with no protection
Tomorrow the greens and blues
Are the ones that all will see
The sky a flawless sapphire
Emerald vines around the tree
The ocean, an endless bloom
Of a forget-me-not shade
And for this beautiful sight
There's not one thing I would trade
Author notes
Something I just threw together for this contest. Not very good.
A contest entry
- Ages 13 and Under Only ~ It's All about Nature! by Amunet Wolfbane.
525 points, ended August 15, 2007, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Feedback please (:
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This is very good and beautifully done
I love it
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Such a lovely description of the joys that mother nature brings us. My favourite stanza is the third one. But I love the whole poem. Well done Sarah. You have great vision.
Patx
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Very Good!
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Thnx
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Wow...this is a brilliant poem...you painted Mother Nature using all her beautiful and vibrant colors...and I think she'll be grateful with that...and I would also not trade the colors of Mother Nature with anything else...goodluck...
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Thank you
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