Satin sheet easel soothes the swallowing silence,
slipping slowly beyond desire's looking glass.
Serenity stains the soul in enchanting whiffs
as secret tapestry of stunning sensations
engulfs the mind in a collage of breathless creations.
Heart surrenders to the calming visionary strokes
inhaled with the intensity of dawn's purest crispness.
One becomes an euphoric phantom
happily following Tinker Bell's wings
to Neverland's seduction.
A contest entry
- PIF....QUICKIE.....WELL SORTA by JoyfulWriter.
450 points, ended August 7, 2007, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~*~ Double Your Gold ~*~ by Asfand.
450 points, ended August 14, 2007, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pre-write Quickie - READ BEFORE ENTERING by StormGoddess.
300 points, ended August 14, 2007, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Gold Winning Poems by amaranthine lover.
300 points, ended August 23, 2007, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - THIRD TIME LUCKY by maa.
333 points, ended August 25, 2007, 7 entries
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500 points, ended September 3, 2007, 103 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - My favorites Bring Favorites by LadyLeviathan.
700 points, ended September 10, 2007, 29 entries
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900 points, ended September 19, 2007, 30 entries
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450 points, ended September 8, 2007, 61 entries
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300 points, ended October 1, 2007, 90 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrites! by aeolia.
380 points, ended January 19, 2008, 116 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - WINNER TAKE ALL!!!! ONE THOUSAND POINTS (well sort of) by DrunkenRam.
1019 points, ended November 16, 2007, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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3 golds, 1 silver and 1 HM
Congrats, well deserved, this is a divine poem.
Nicely penned
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Guilty (Everybody's guilty)
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First of all I love the Picture it is Awesome Second of all Congratulations on all the previously won trophies they are well deserved. Third I wish you the best of luck in this contest Submissions for Poetry Magazine. by Norman Crabtree. 550 points, ends November 16, 48 entries
and lastly my favorite part of the poem
Satin sheet easel soothes the swallowing silence,
slipping slowly beyond ((desire's))) looking glass.
Serenity stains the soul in enchanting whiffs
as secret tapestry of stunning sensations
engulfs the mind in a collage of breathless creations.
Heart surrenders to the calming visionary strokes
inhaled with the intensity of dawn's purest crispness.
One becomes an euphoric phantom
happily following Tinker Bell's wings
to ((Neverland's)) seduction.
this is beautiful P... my fire fox is pointing out the things in parentheses though sorry
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Wow~ Fantasy, mystical and heavenly. Congrats on the other trophies, very well deserved. Thanxx for entering, I would have prefered a longer write, though.
Luv,
Candy
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Wow, you have entered this in a whole lot of contest, it is a beautiful stage you have created for such a write here. I loved the word choice in this piece, it flowed effortlessly off the page
Thank you for taking the time to enter your favourite prewrite in this contest, I wish you the very best of luck
Karen -
Dreamy, mystical...felt like I was floating along just enjoying all of natures exemplary beuty that is before me...that you so vividly and richly penned...well done..best of luck!
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wow this is beautifully penned! a quicky right huh? fantastic! the picture used is AMAZING! wonderful I say Wonderful!
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i love the imagery here. very smoothly written.
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you are so lucky, your poem must have won a third gold trophy in the meantime ... and so it does not conform to the contest rules anymore (which require 2 gold trophies ONLY)
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congratulations on your triple gold for this masterpiece !
maa -
"Heart surrenders to the calming visionary strokes
inhaled with the intensity of dawn's purest crispness."
Oh my! This is really beautiful!!! I like the words weaved in this masterpiece.
Thanks for sharing my friend. Keep writing
>>>VIRGOAN
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this is wicked awesome
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Nicely done. Thank you for entering. Storm
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Gorgeous!!
This is Precious Sweetness
Images to bring forth Beauty through Your words~
Wonderful!
Loved this!!
A tapestry of silk woven~
Congratulations on Your Trophy win!!
Best wishes to You
Many blessings too
and my Love
~ Desire~*~
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WOW WOW WOW
You are smokin, this is suppurb poetry my friend
great take on that pic.
Congrats on one of the newest golden shinies
delila
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WOW! You did great with this image! Your words magnified so much emotion...great job! Thanks for entering my contest...good luck...smiles, Terry
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Nice alliteration in the first stanza, and the imagery could keep me occupied for hours...love it. I adore the pic that was chosen as well.."happily following Tinker Bell's wings to Neverland's seduction"...mmmm...nice image there...Peace, Rhonda oh, and good luck in the contest!
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