Oiled bodies baking in rays
Watching, peeking gaze
Burning, stoking his flames
Hand firing, beast to tame
Nipples skyward, offering he sees
Bound Eden's gate, dropped to knees
His lust ready to be given
Sees wife, her sex is forbidden.
Author notes
Prompt: Burnt offering and forbidden love
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A contest entry
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WHOA
Great take on the prompt 
Well done and good luck
delila
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Very nicely done for the prompt.best of luck in the contest...Scott
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Outstanding write you did an amazing job on the take of the prompt. Wow you have such grand talent with your words. The best of luck
LISA
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HOLY MOLY....Yikes ..great take on the prompt i really liekd this one. Thanks for your entry best of luck to you
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Beautifully Written
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Oh bimp.
Nice!!
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“Seduce the hole within this darkened heart, make me want to pass out in your arms.”
Or
“ your at the bottom of my bottle, swallow you or pour you in the toilet”
or
“Burnt offerings, and forbidden love”
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