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Mother's Chains

How could you not see,
How could you continue to do this to me?
I’ve told you,
But you don’t hear me,
I’ve shown you,
Yet you don’t see me
Where have you gone?
What have you done?
Darkness crept into me,
And you didn’t care
Devils fed on my innocent soul,
And you did nothing but stare
Calling out for you,
Screaming for comfort,
Receiving blank eyes
I have learned to fend for myself
Where you have failed I have succeeded
My presence is no longer shadowed by you
No longer imprisoned by your disappointment
It was never about them, never about everyone else
Mother it was me, it was me, you never listened
You just pushed me away, but now I’m free
Not bound by your foreign chains

BY: Corey Klosterman

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i have lost my mother, she will never come back. the woman she is now is someone i won't know, she has lost herself and now she has lost me. so just please if you would, tell me what you think.....

please tell me anything you think about it.....

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  • weird02
    May 30, 2008
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    corey i love your work love you sooo much n im alway here for u


  • jessica2394
    September 10, 2007

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    Nice. I like this one. I can tell you do too. I can also tell that this part of your life is very significant to who you are as a person now. well anyways its very good. Love you.
    Jessica

  • weird02
    August 11, 2007

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    omg corey what do you mean i know about the arrested thing i want to tell u i love you so much and that im here for you i love u alot and so dose rachel we love u
    cait