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The Shadows And The Silence

I lay on my bed watching the walls darken in color as the day slowly ends, listening to the same CD over and over again.

Cicadas chirp...

Is it still summer?
Cuz it feels so cold, knowing that my phone isn't going to ring anymore.

And I'll be going out with other friends, but there are too many scents in the air that remind me of you. It doesn't matter how many other times and with how many other people I visit places with; if I had spent even a moment in the same place with you, I'll feel that memory burning inside of me.

Laying here and not sure if I miss you right now. All I know is I'm sad and feeling the quiet like a physical pressure on my chest, making it hard to breathe. And I know you are the cause of this depression.

You are the Winter to my Summer. My Capricorn lover. Your loyal Leo. I'll always light up your life if only you would ask me to.

Until then, I'll wait quietly in the shadows and the silence.

~L. J. Arien

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  • Forget
    August 7, 2007
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    • L. J. Arien
      August 7, 2007
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      he deleted me off of facebook.
      but not myspace. (I guess to spy on me), but I can't spy on him? w/e...idc


  • raggyann
    August 6, 2007
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    how sad and painful
    this poem makes me feel


  • TwiztidMaggot
    August 6, 2007

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    wow, this is really good. I love how you wrote it... it's like I'm really inside your head with this peice! good work! keep it up!

    Crimson

  • UltimoJ
    August 6, 2007
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    Did I mention that love stinks?

  • UltimoJ
    August 6, 2007

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    I'm sad and feeling the quiet like a physical pressure on my chest, making it hard to breathe. And I know you are the cause of this depression.

    Took the words out of my mouth.

    Love stinks.

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