It rains Patron
when my dots don't connect.
Fuck the shot glass
i'll suck on the bottle a bit.
your face is always
clearer that way
and
my need is always less.
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Hey, sis. Missed you. Write on.
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the curve of the bottle
distorts his face into clarity
and by closing one eye
there are only
half as many bastards
to drink with
Your poetry works best when edgy. It amazes me that your heated passion doesn't cook the raw emotion that you write with. Your work is always worth a read...
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Hey!!! I don't think alcoholism runs in your family!!!
At least not on this side!
lol...
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so nice to see words from you again
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I thought as the shots start piling on, the need increases. That's why we call them "beer goggles" after all. And it's not the shot glass you will be expressing "fuck" to. Women do have one advantage in that situation, though. Their performance isn't affected. By contrast, that was a nice little joke that God put into the male genome...
Seriously, I am delighted you paid a nice hello to my author page. It reminded me to see if you had written anything recently, and I am very pleased to see the answer is yes. Because you are a great poet.
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Thank the lord I've never stooped so low as to drink tequila to avoid a problem... though I have on occasion invented problems as an excuse to drink.
Hugs and snuggles (i figger if thumwum else can pull that off, so can i).
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haha stoop huh? I don't drink tequila to avoid the problems I drink it cause I find all the answers at the bottom of the bottle hehe just kidding. yum yum tequila
hugs and snuggles hehe
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thank god for liquor, the all-numbing liquid. great lines, the ending was exquisite, perfectly written. have a nice day!
-lys
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I can recall the days when the "shot glass" didn't do the trick. Reality is; the bottle doesn't either sometimes.
I'm always glad to see your name pop up Venessa. I miss you, and keep you close to my heart. Your poem seems sad. I hope things are well with you and your twin. I know your baby girl is beautiful, and sassy as ever. Just like her mommy. Take care dear heart.
Always ♥
Renee
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My dear Renee how I have missed you. I hope you are well. Thank you for your comment and believe it or not life is going perfectly for me right now. very little to complain about (besides my beautiful preteen daughter who thinks shes 21 lol) thank you.
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A tequila poem! You know that the buzz hurts and heals...nice job, Ness. I like this.
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the buzz is the best part my dear friend. thank you honey.
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Hugs sis, and I sooo know how you feel. Of all the things on Earth, woman is the most easily bruised.
Perhaps someday.....never know. I love and miss you. Hugs and snuggles.
Blessings,
Billie Jean
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honey its not as bad as it sounds and this was written more for his pain then mine. think reality has set in for him and he has a choice to make. thank you sister I love you and miss you sooooo much.
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