To Whom It Concerns,
I write this to tell you all,
those who saw my blood on the wall,
To tell all those who made me cry,
That you are the reason that i must die,
To all of those who called me weak,
That this is the path you sent me to seek,
To all of those who threw me aside,
The ones that made me run and hide,
To Whom It Concerns,
I've given up hope, because it was lost,
They all turned from me, at a deadly cost,
Now the white carpet is covered in red,
To whom it concerns,
I'm finally dead...
A contest entry
- oh, to just disappear... by CarCrashHumor.
1500 points, ended August 15, 2007, 48 entries
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440 points, ended August 18, 2007, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Open up and give me emotion by Velvet Rose Petals.
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I think at one point in life we all need to feel this feeling, of extreme depression and that no one cares, because within that time we learn a lot about our strengths and learn who we are as a person. Once a person is stripped of everything they find who they are, and this is just the start..
Good job
Rose
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I love how you personalized the poem. You did an excellent job with this. Goodluck in my contest and thanks for entering it
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a chilling letter
nice rhyming, it didn't seem forced.
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