C onsumed by your kiss, your tender touch, the warmth of your hands upon my skin
O h the anticipation turns me on, biting your bottom lip I slip
M y tongue into your mouth, exploring tasting you, tingling, you pull me closer
E ach kiss fuels my wanton desires, sending chills down my back like a burning fire
T ed E Bare can you feel the heat? I am the phoenix conjured by your fire
O ur bodies glisten, perspire as our pleasures soar , I catch my
B reath as your tongue circles my erect nipples, saliva glistens where you've sucked
E agerly I slide my hand around your swollen girth, a deep throated moan you
D ispel, intoxicated by my touch, I spiral down and take your cock into my mouth
W hispering sweet nothings along the way, sucking and caressing the tip of your cock
I take you to the back of my throat, groaning you
T ake hold of my head controling my rise and fall, closing your eyes your
H ead falls back as I take your full length again, releasing a deep sigh,
M oving your hands you raise my head to meet your lips, in a state of
E xhilaration, ripples of delight run along my skin, I shudder and sigh
T easing you slide your hand over then between my thighs,
E asing your finger over my clit,the friction brings a slow release of pleasure
D on't stop, I moan, fingering me you slip two fingers into my moist slit, a moan
E scapes me, reaching over to the bedside cabinet you produce a vibrator
B urning with anticipation, you turn it on slipping it inside, giving me
A n intense surge of pleasure, masturbating me with it you take it deeper
R eaching a state of intense pleasure, moans, cries, sighs
E scape my lips, eyes closed my body contorts as I
L ose control, heart palpitates, breaths get shallow, weaker
E cstacy takes over, straddling over you I lower myself onto your
T hrobbing cock, grasping my hips you guide me deeper, thrusting as our bodies
S tart to rock, bodies glistening hot,trickles of perspiration run from your torso
M oving your hands over the curve of my hips, your hands trace their way back to my
A mple breasts, cupping them you tease my erect nipples, biting and sucking, licking
K eeping your thrusts slick and even your breathing starts to deepen, quicken,
E jaculation nearing you take hold of my hips again, guiding me with
L onger harder thrusts, breathless no longer able to control your imminent climax,
O verwhelmed by a feeling of euphoria, you arch your back, thrusting
V iolently you release your liquid hotness into your Phoenix
E voked, conjured up by your burning lust, united just the two of us.
Author notes
Acrostic
A contest entry
- Teddy Bear Lost, But Ted E Bare Found! by Ted E Bare.
300 points, ended September 30, 2007, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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oh my acrostic line says it all
Come to bed with me, Ted E Bare, let's make love.
Honny if that don't turn him on,
not sure what will
for an open invite like that
is pefect and I know I loved it -
WOW! I am blown away....speechless and wet here,lol a feeling I need not have while alone in my house,with no TED E in sight!
Thanks for sharing this delightful treat.
As Always~
Deena
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Bravo Bravo You go Sis
Wow Sis you blew my mind, You are amazing You left me speechless.
LISA
"B reath as your tongue circles my erect nipples, saliva glistens where you've sucked
E agerly I slide my hand around your swollen girth, a deep throated moan you
D ispel, intoxicated by my touch, I spiral down and take your cock into my mouth
W hispering sweet nothings along the way, sucking and caressing the tip of your cock
I take you to the back of my throat, groaning you
T ake hold of my head controling my rise and fall, closing your eyes your
H ead falls back as I take your full length again, releasing a deep sigh,"
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W-H-E-W!!!! I just felt like we spent over three hours in bed of pure erotic pleasure (which is a great thing in every sense of the word). Loved it being an acrostic with a message. Extremely Creative!!!!! I want to thank you for entering my "Teddy Bear Lost, But Ted E Bare Found" contest.
Ted E
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Fantastic piece
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love this...over and over,
E
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Brilliant
Fantastic. The imagery is superb. Wonderful writing here. Hot, sensual and deep. Well done, Sugar.
Wayne
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you are a complete erotic 
this was hot babes hell you do great with the acrostics i hope you win i have my fingers crassed ~ julia ~
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You are hot as usual, girlfriend, but save some for me, ok?
I love you,
Brazos
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Love IT.....
wonderful entry my sister...very well penned as it always is...love your style...Ted E Bare....now how cool is that?
Much luv,
Piffy
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A SWEET AND SENSUAL PIECE, INDEED!
GOOD LUCK in this contest with this wonderful piece that will have Ted E Bare JERKING the night away - if he has the right stuff (LOL) as these three happy fellows were with their hands up in the air who were even barer than Ted E.
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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