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No Pattern

For centuries man from the sun
sought guiding light, but cycles turn, -
where light is now one day will none
remain to kindle hope or burn.

And so it is - who live for fun,
who after resurrection yearn,
together rot, - since time begun
there is no Paradise to earn.

No pattern, when all’s said and done,
emerges that man may discern, -
where is the empire of the Hun ?
So little learnt, so much to learn !

What token’s Time, how is it spun ?
will Earth in ice end, in fire burn ?
and if the All invent the One -
comes coot from egg, haunts egg the hern ?

Author notes

For last line see Tennyson The Brook

I come from haunts of coot and hern ./.

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  • aboomer silver member
    August 6, 2007
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    I like the underlying questions this asks....questions asked by many, I think. How will life end, is there life after death, etc. Seems like sometimes there is no 'pattern' to life, and just when someone thinks there is - the patterns change.
    Great wording. I enjoyed this. Good luck in your contest.


  • Cherokee
    August 6, 2007
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    This held my interest...