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Poems for Grumps

Lymeric

There once was a lively old bloke,
And one day he had a stroke,
His famliy cared,
To him, no-one compared,
So here's to that lively old bloke!


Acrostic

Grandads are a special gift,
Really intelligent is what you are,
Unique, and,
Many,
People would love to be as inspiring as you,
So I hope you get well soon!!


Sodukian

I heard you were feeling a bit ill,
So I decided to use my skill,
Of writing, these poems for you,
I heard you were feeling a bit blue,
You should recover well in theory,
I hope this will make you so cheery,
I heard you were under the weather,
Prehaps you need some lucky heather,
We all hope that you will get better!

Author notes

Please don't correct any spelling/grammar mistakes, coz I'm likly 2 send you a lot of hate mail, and I'm too depressed to think of any decent insults!!!! thanx.

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  • xXEndless-PainXx
    January 23, 2008
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    wow wowow wowowowowo your sooooo good at poetry ^-^
    he he he he i like pie...mmmm maybe you should write a poem about pie... that would be fun... he he
    hellllllllloooooooooooooooo
    talala
    XxX



  • Mybeautyisfake
    August 9, 2007
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    these were very nice dear.
    im sorry your depressed.. =[
    im always here to talk to you okay?


  • Lord Dracon
    August 8, 2007

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    These were great! You must really care about your grandad, The lymeric was kinda funny, Acrostic giving praise, and the sodukian, cheering him up. Great job!


    • xXEndless-PainXx
      August 8, 2007
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      Well he's just had a heart attack followed by a stroke, so I'm really worried about him.
      Savvy
      oxox


  • Madison Mary
    August 7, 2007

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    Aww hun...if you need to talk about anything, I'm always here for you. Beautiful writes, I'm sure he'd love them. Hope things get better soon!
    Love always, your dedicated AP sis,
    Madison xoxo

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