Touch me.
Tease me.
Stroke me.
Please me.
Grip me.
Kiss me.
Bruise me.
Miss me.
Feel me.
Breathe me.
Hold me.
Need me.
Feel amusement, affection,
infatuation, lust.
I don't want your heart,
for I will turn it to dust.
Promise me just one thing
as we - dance - the night away.
Promise you will never love me,
but please, I beg you, stay.
Please tell me what you think
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i like this one too. the rhyme scheme at the end rocks. good one
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bravo
A sad and very poignant piece--I thought the first 12 lines were exceptional!--and excellent poem! bravo... bravo... bravo...
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Hello... This sucked! Hah, just kidding. Thought I would give you a bit of a mindfuck by saying that because everyone else was like "I love it"... It was alright, I wouldn't say its your best, but it is pretty good. Just being honest with ya.
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Haha, thanks, jerkoff. Thanks for the honesty. I know it's not my best. *shrugs* Just thought I'd try something new.
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i really love this one
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Thanks, Amber.
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any time my love
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Hey, this is awesome. It's kinda how I tend to treat relationships sometimes, heh. A thumbs up for trying something new, too. Best way to get new ideas.
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Thanks, Mister Thane. Glad you enjoyed.
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I love this.
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Thanks, chickadee.
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oooh, i like this. For some reason, i really do.
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Thanks. This isn't my usual writing style, at all. Just thought I'd mess around and try something different. Glad you enjoyed.
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