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The black of my night sky

My night sky is eternal
Internal
Stretching on forever
In all directions

The moon
Is my pale hope that my life will get better

The stars
Are just the tear drops from my pain

The blackness is...
...me

I see the world from the shadows
Not because I fear the light
But because I prefer the dark

My life is me
I am my night sky
So if you should ever glimpse my sky

Try to read the story written in the stars

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  • Coco Mara
    August 6, 2007

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    I like your poem. I'm drawn to stanzaas five and six, they're very well written and i feel like i can understand them.