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An Idea

Were I not me
I'd wish to give you the world
And release your dreams through me
As an idea
A muse
Something seemingly simple
That would rock your roots
Blast open doors
That otherwise would be immovably bolted
I'd make people see
Just what a value you are
And coax the best from your soul
Give yourself to me
Devote your life, its all I ask
Pursue me with fervor
And I will present you with
A dream come true

Author notes

Were I not human, I'd want to make someone happy, but make them work for it. Persevere, suffer, reap the givings of a revolutionary idea. *shrugs* Hard for me to describe, but...
I'll leave it at that.

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    August 7, 2007
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    Thank you for your wonderful entry, Josephine


  • bat-bogey
    August 6, 2007

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    interesting...
    very interesting.
    i like it.
    the end was great..
    And I will present you with
    A dream come true