I forgot how it felt to love
and I forgot what you meant to me
I don't know what I was thinking of
I was blind but now I can see
I told you that it all was over
and that we could never really ever be friends
but I guess it will never be over
because True love never really ends
And I've traveled through countries to escape your gaze
because I thought that it was best for you
and I avoided thinking about you in a thousand ways
because I doubted that my love was true
and I know I don't deserve to ever say your name
and you have every right to refuse
but my words could never really ever be the same
if you are not my muse
I broke your heart a long time ago
and I don't deserve to put it together
but maybe these words can be a way to show
that I meant it when I said forever
I only said those things so you could move on with your life
but now I can't seem to move on with mine
but I'll keep on with my pain and with my strife
and just keeping writing until the next line
I know I yelled and I screamed so that you would go away
but that was only so you could escape me
but now that you're gone, I really wish you would stay
because this silence will most definitely break me
I'm only here to say I'm sorry and beg you to forgive
and you have every right to refuse
but now I realize you're my reason to live
won't you please be my muse?
Please tell me what you think
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This is really beautiful. I think so many people do this without even realizing it, I know I have. It expresses so much and uses rhyme beautifully.
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Beautiful
You just gave me goosebumps...such raw honesty, a plea for forgiveness...you certianly put your feelings out there. I do commend you for that. I too have pushed away the one I love(d), and it does rip a person up inside. You seem to be ripped up inside, like you just want to be with this person to feel whole again. My wish for you is for that to happen in your life. Best of luck to you.-Monica
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yep.....you basically nailed it on the tip of the head.
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You are a wonderful writer big bro. And this write shows it all the more you have such emotion in this piece. Of course your rhyming is flawless once again. I really like this piece you did a great job and muses can be just blah. Keep up the amazing writes bro.
You are always an inspiration
Never give up
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Good invitation
good write. A muse can be murderous at times. Believe me I know.
Smile,
Judy
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wow.This is.....good.I like how it goes.U did a very nice job.my favorite part is "but maybe these words can be a way to show that i meant it when i said forever." When i first start reading this i was like wow, this person is a very thoughtful person.Keep up the good work. and keep writing these amazing poems!
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