Little sweet baby developing inside,
How I'm dreading to hear you cry.
Little angel, my baby girl,
I'm bringing into my unstable world.
So innocent she seems to seep in me,
I'm afraid what she needs I cant be.
My baby is so tiny, I cant feed myself,
What am I going to do to keep her in good health?
My little one turns in my belly and I tear up,
I want all these bad thoughts to stop.
I know that my little girl will love me no matter what,
As long as I love her and laugh with her alot.
My little girl is coming any day now,
I'm smiling big, theres no need to frown
Author notes
Nicole Palmer
I am not 18 but I am the legal gaurdian of myself..if that is not ok my parents are more than willing to sign a release form for me
A contest entry
- letter to a baby by CarCrashHumor.
600 points, ended August 11, 2007, 35 entries
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good stuff
beat mine!
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A heartfelt write. Deep expression of emotion. Good flow, rhyme and tone. Well done.
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This is amazing!!!! I love it!!! You did an awesome job on this one! I remember having some of those thoughts when I was pregnant with my boys, and today would not trade one minute of their lives for anything!! Best of luck in this contest!
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ooh thats so heart touching ...i dont know if your having a baby ..or you just wrote that...but if you are i wish you all the best in the coming future and im sure your gona make a fantastic mother .
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far too young to have one, I'm deffinatley not prepared to have a child. But my boyfriend always worries about it when I get sick and we talk about it alot...as in what would we do... so I'm use to thinking about it. I hope to god that I'm not... a baby deserves a stable home
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yes i supose so...oh well i enjoyed it all the same.
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