After all,
This fairy tale,
Isn't the happily ever after I imagined.
I thought of,
My Prince Charming,
Carrying me and everyone happy,
That I'm happy.
But I'm more like Cinderella,
I don't deserve happiness,
I don't get anything but a few rags,
And a lot of orders.
I dream of him,
Riding on a Horse,
Getting me,
And saving me from this world.
I have found him,
But my time has ran out.
And now all I and him can do,
Is wait this thing out.
Cause,
Prince Charming,
Will one day,
Save his Cinderella.
A contest entry
- make me love again by forgotten souls.
300 points, ended September 19, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Lovely Eternities Are For FairyTale Princesses.♥ by WishMeAway--x.
750 points, ended October 12, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thi swas well penned dear one. Great flow.
this was so full of great emotion and vivid detail makes me swoon.
doesnt take much i am always a happy happy person, okk i lied but pieces like this make me happy. great job good luck
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good write
good luck in contest -
love da wright baby doll!
best keep it up u my dear have talent, luvz///xoxox
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thanks for the comment on "A Cinderella Story Of My Own" im glad you think i have talent
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sweet i liked this it has that ease to which you are so good at nice one
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thanks im glad that my poetry eases you. i appriciate your comment
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That he will sweetie, that he will. You guys will make it okay, you'll see. Things change. =]
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