Strolling along the beach
you and I, hand in hand,
united infinitely within reach
A message of
L
o
v
e
in the sand
Oblivious to the world outside
you and I, across the land
Feeling warmth from the sand, we stride
A message of
L
o
v
e
in the sand
Captivated on love's shoreline
Author notes
picture prompt: Message of love(heart drawn) on the beach
A contest entry
- Morning Quickie 10/50/30 by poet2angels.
475 points, ended August 6, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Invite Only; Me on Their List by Ted E Bare.
300 points, ended January 3, 2008, 79 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Friends welcome by Riftkin.
500 points, ended June 8, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is truly wonderful
you have done a great job
as I remember that picture
even before looking.
Riftkin
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Done very nicely as I loved how you were creative using the word love in your poem. I want to thank you for entering my "Invite Only; Me On Their List" contest.
Ted E
PS: Once I have commented on all of your entries, then I will reread them all and choose the one that will be brought forward for being selected as Gold, Silver, Bronze or HM.
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I really enjoyed this.
I just adore how you spread out the word "love" into the sand.
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I like how you incorporated the image into the work through both word and the "falling" letters. Best of luck in the contest. ~Jim
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Beautiful!
I love the repetitive line and the ending line is perfect...Great take on the prompt! TY for entering!
Lynda
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PROMPT IS:
"traces of you"
or
the picture above...
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