I sit with my legs crossed.
I make sure my horns are on staight.
I like to play hard and vicious.
When you meet me, you enter Hell's gates.
I am a tortured soul.
I bring havoc and grief.
The day of your death is paradise.
Even the Grim Reaper fears me.
I try to keep my halo on straight.
I appear to be sane.
I am a view of perfection.
I have a reputation to maintain.
Collecting men's souls.
They don't put up a fight.
I move in quietly.
Like a thief in the night.
I am twisted and wicked.
So beautiful, yet so cold.
I must confess...
For this job I sold my soul.
For good reason I did.
I'm like a good neighbor,
Draining the souls of liars.
Im doing the world a favor.
No need to thank me.
This is a courtesy to you.
For all the women scorned
Through me they will feel the wrath of you.
A contest entry
- Good and Evil by Dlvvanzor.
300 points, ended August 10, 2007, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Mystics by Alastair.
400 points, ended November 1, 2007, 3 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The excitement consumes me ... rawr by Megan Awesome.
550 points, ended November 29, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - OPEN FOR ALL- Give me your best by Razor-Blade Romance.
440 points, ended November 22, 2007, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Round One of Five by Kei-Aira.
450 points, ended February 5, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Wicked Sensation by Acidanthra.
700 points, ended March 1, 2008, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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very good rhyming scheme, juvenile it is definitely not. I liked this piece because it used both "wicked" and sensation all in one. very wisely penned!!
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Thank you so much!
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This was indeed well penned and spoke in heavy volume. Great job with it and best wishes in all you endeavor. Thank you for sharing this with me. Keep that pen handy dear poet.
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very dark yet wonderful , I actually love this write!
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This is a dark and amazing poem.
Truly awesome !
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Interesting lol. I like it. Kinda funny as well ... in a very very demented way. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck!!!
Megan -
very well done, you have really made your words very forceful and put a lot of power into this. excellent work this is great
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NIce
This poem does indded fit what I asked for. You are simply a "messenger" of both sides. You chose to work for both maybe both didn't know but this is very good. Great job and good luck in the contest. I won't remove it.
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very interesting. I've never seen a poem done like this and I think you did quiet well in it. the differences and all that stuff shown are awesome. well done, you really deserved the silver for this, probably even the gold.
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good work. i am glad i read this.i think line 8 is wrong, i do not fear you. but i thnik that you are a dark and twisted soul full of pian and hate. your just my type. keep up the good work. keep writing and i'll keep reading.
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this is an interesting poem and I fear the soul collector but not death or the devil.
Riftkin -
enchanting
make sure your forked tail is high and lifted up. Nothing is uglier than a devil with his tail tucked between his legs.
Wonderful write!
Please smile,
Judy
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Awesome! Great job. Very evil.
Thanks for entering,
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OMG! This poem is incredible. It's so amazing and I really wish there could be a being like this somewhere, in heaven or hell. This was great and the rhyme was awesome! The imagery took me by storm. It was so awesome. Great piece!
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awesome
i absolutely loved it
haha we could be twins C:
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had to come back and read this one again ... surely there should be a contest where u can enter this one in? i cannot believe how brilliant this one is!!!!!
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Thank you so much for you compliment and coming back and reading it. I will have to enter it. Thank you.
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this is really well written with great imagery! their is a contest about the conflicting points of good and evil you should enter this!
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nice poem my love, very good indeed i like he imagy i had gotten out of it, keep it up..xoxoxox -
Oooh this was so dark! I loved it! It was amazingly descriptive. Brilliant
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loved this one! very dark and so very descriptive! cannot tell you how much I enjoyed this one
I can imagine him standing there trying to look innocent and failing horribly, but in retospect, he doesn't actually fail ... this is a twisted write that I give a standing ovation to - BLOODY EXCELLENT!!!!
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Thank you for your comment. It means so much coming from you because you are so awesome in my book!
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