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Deserts of Palm Springs

 

The sun beats down across the California desert walls

and its cracked dry ground was hard as a rock.

You could see windmills in a distance of the heat wave

turning in slow motion as salt seeped from my pores

and stung my eyes as I wiped it off.

I continued my journey step by step a little closer to home.

Palm springs just a few more miles

 but I knew it would feel like a trip across the world.

As I become closer to the melting asphalt of the highway,

 I could see the herd of tarantula’s scurry across.

Amazing the insects that lived within this hell of heat

wondering when and how their next prey would arrive.

This desert gave no mercy to anything that lived here

Yet cactus thrived on the San Bernardino winds that blew.

Even with the sun setting, my blood still boiled from the heat

and the mountains gave no relief with it shadow bearing across.

Coyotes ran across the plain thinking I was their next meal

but little did they know I had other plans about retiring.

As the night came upon me, so did the cold air

through this hollow valley which I traveled.

Finally out from its brutal environment, I looked back

and realized the beauty in the distant darkness outlined

knowing I would take this trip again in time...

 

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  • Danna Hobart
    August 21, 2007

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    This is lovely. I know that drive down around Palm Springs well. It's been more than a year since I've been down around that way though. This gave me a deep sense of nostalgia. Made me ache for a road trip. Thank you for entering.


  • cutiepie gold member
    August 7, 2007
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    Strange, how often many would see this environment as barren and desolute, but you have chosen to point out the place as beautiful...nature indeed holds many wonders, from Tarantula's ( which bring me out in hives) to Coyotes, each in their own way a miracle of survival. Thank you for this visit to a place I have never visited


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    August 6, 2007
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    Finally out from its brutal environment, I looked back and realized the beauty in the distant darkness outlined knowing I would take this trip again in time...I just loved this! You painted such a wonderful picture it felt like I was walking with youThank you so much for the adventure


  • grannyeri gold member
    August 6, 2007
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    Very reflective these lines - bring back another time when you travelled here - very prose like, this poetry, tells a story of the progress made through the harsh environment that is the desert. Should Springs be capitalized? Thanks for taking me on this trip through the desert, not often I get to visit this place -