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Desire

Bruises on my back from being pushed against the car,
He put a knife against my neck, I cant believe he took it that far.
He had me by my arm, his grip was so tight,
I was moving around, i was trying to put up a fight.
cuts on my neck for that knife u held so softly on my skin,
At the time I wasn’t scared, my face was covered with a large grin.
But he was too strong, I mean I really felt the cold in his touch,
He said he wanted to take me to my grave, and that he hated me that much.
He said if he couldn’t have me then no one else will,
He said his feelings were so strong, for love he would kill.
But this love was forbidden, this love was untrue,
A love full of lies and deceit, a love full of pain I endured from you.
Now for you to take it this far, it blows my mind,
You have been pushing that envelope but now u have crossed the line.
I cant be with you, I will never again be your slave,
My pride has come back, and for you YES I AM TO BRAVE!
Stalk me all you want, kill me if you that is what you want,
because I have lost sight of you, never again my dreams you will haunt.
You will never have me, no matter what you try and do,
I am not afraid, I wont even try and hide anymore from you.
If you take my life then guess what I still wont be yours,
I will b gone forever, so get someone else to beat, rape, and do all of ur chores.
This is goodbye coz forever your heart burns in my fire,
You will burn alive one day, coz just like the devil you couldn’t control ur desire.

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  • Queen Of His Heart
    September 2, 2007
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    really hits home

    wow i have been through exactly what you have written recently and had tried so many time to put the experience into words, but all of which ended up being a screwed up piece of paper in the recycle bin! reading this i feel like you were there as it all happened to me
    Good luck in your writing and your career
    Nattassja

  • sweetdreamsforyou
    August 6, 2007

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    dang.....

    wow.thats really good.not a true story type thing i hope...?love how its so informal,like ur actually tlkn 2 sum1.ur right.the devil cant control his desire and it always leads to his downfall.great write.