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Our Night to Remember (Adult/Erotic)

Craving your every touch
as we kiss together as one,
tongues hungrily intwined
fulfilling our every passion.
Sparks flowing throughout our bodies;
fueling our ever wanting desires
through our downward explorations,
wanting you with every breath;
quivering, as we press closer
more intensely with each added kiss
circling, sucking my hardening nipples
feeling your hard arising manhood
Stopping long enough to reposition
the slightest breath, tightening your skin
Running my tongue around the glans;
before deeply taking you in to the root,
giving intense sudden pleasure within.
Reciprocatingly, sliding fingers into
my engorged and moistening clit.
The faster we go, the heightened
our fulfilling burning fires.
But we don't end it there...
Sensing my wanting needs
entering with unbridled abandon,
reeling in our throbbing lusts,
friction empowering our souls.
Submitting to eternal passions
fulfilling our long awaiting love
beyond points of no return.
We climax, explosively, together as one
united forever, eternally whole.

Loving you is the most incredible
thing I can ever faithfully do
since you came into my life.
Laying, arm in arm, upon your chest
mesmerized in my desires of you,




















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This is an anonymous contest - my name must be kept hidden from the contest host

This is deffinitely a type of write I'm not used to normally writing but yea the picture evoked the ideas quite well.

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  • Silent Cougar Moderators member
    September 7, 2007

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    A very imaginative piece, in more ways than one. I can feel the words in this one, and that makes it aa erotic as it could be. well done on this.


  • Riftkin gold member
    August 30, 2007

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    this is great
    and I am sure
    that Ted E. Bare
    will love it
    for he is a great guy

    Good luck.

    Riftkin


  • Always Deena
    August 21, 2007

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    Sounds like a beautiful love filled night,I am certain,Ted E would remember this always. Very well done! Such a romantic warm entry,I am very impressed.
    As Always~
    Deena


  • Ted E Bare gold member
    August 13, 2007

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    As you said about the picture, it even inspired the contest. Thank you for such a passionate and erotic entry. It was very impresive as well as sensuous! I want to thank you for entering my "Teddy Bear Lost, But Ted E Bare Found" contest.

    Ted E


  • hopelessly-broken
    August 6, 2007
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    wow..... amazing!!!

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