If you can,
Then do.
A contest entry
- 8 Entries Only!!! PIF Quickie by prisoner2121.
300 points, ended August 6, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I like this if more people would live by it then so much in this world would be better. Thank you for sharing this best wishes xxxx
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I don't agree with LaurenG. I think she didn't fully understand what you were saying here, short as it is. Besides that, I think the reply was unnecessary rude.
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The reply? My reply?
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No not your reply, I meant her comment. In my opinion one simply doesn't say a poem is bs. That's not uplifting critique. That's all.
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this is bs and you know it...granted its for a contest, but that does not matter; because a person is capable of doing something never means that they should
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That's not exactly the message here though. It's more of a positive poem.
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Hood-Winked!
Wow so little words but packs a powerful punch. We need to reach for our dreams and not give up. Wonderful write and very thought provoking.
You have just been Hood-Winked courtesy of the Poetic Bandits
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wow
powerful...little words with huge delivery!I like it -
short, but i like it
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Short and simple, but smart.
Great poem.
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well this makes me think. If you can then do any think you want to that you feel you can achive if you do not achive what you want to at first glance try until you do. excellent good luck
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