I don't feel.
It's there, I'm sure, but...
I can't feel it.
Searching, digging,
Ripping through the
closet in which I buried
myself.
I seek to find,
the orb,
the bauble,
the container
that is so familiar as
the house of my passion;
the sanctuary of my soul.
It's here!
I know that it must be!
But...
It's not.
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scary pen face? hmm? interesting, no idea..lol loved this, as always. may i suffer a thousand tortures for not reading your poetry in so long.
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Hood-Winked!
Wow such mystery and such a unique write. Makes one think and ponder a bit. I agree I would sleep with the lights on and the covers over my head! Wonderful imagery. Excellent poem
You have just been Hood-Winked courtesy of the Poetic Bandits
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HOODWINKED!!!
wow... another dark piece, am thinking I might have to sleep with the lights on tonight and the closet door closed! You poetry has alot of metaphoric value and makes it easy for the reader to delve into. Good job dear!
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really good it isn't really sad like all your other poems and it really got me thinking about the title
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An amazingly unique poem, I think the title adds to the mistique of the piece. I love the simplicity of the poem, yet the simultaneous complexity of the issues underlying the words, if that makes sense.
Anyway, love the poem.
Kit
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That's it?
You crazy crazy guy.
scarey pen face.
Anyway, about the poem.
I hope you find it, it's there alright
Believe in it as much as I do in myself.
Actually, scratch that - it's not good advice.
Just - ughh, I don't know.
When I find out, I'll be sure to let you know.
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i like it but i think the title could be better. i loved tho poem i just dont feel the title fits. ya know what i mean? great job hun keep it up!
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Oooh. Mysterious. I like it
I hope I spelled mysterious right. Lol. -
that sucks! I wanna know whats up with the title!
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