This is a power i need to say
And you are the light in the everyday
You are the beauty you are the strength
But it is obvious that you have lost your way
Woman... Not to be mean, but do you remember the meaning of that name
You were the ones that raised us the ones that made us
but so many years of abuse has taken its toll
and some of the younger women have lost their soul
Allowin phrases like thick, banging and fine to mean that you're worth somethin
So far gone that Beautiful now means nothin
I shed a tear, because i was raised to respect you
But instead most young woman find love in the thugs that heck you
You are the givers of life but young girls take that too lightly
They spreadin their legs cause their guys said called them wifey
Wat the hell? His Wifey? you aint even got a ring.
And if i call you beautiful that still means nothing?
You're a goddess, you're a queen now let that mean something
Dont accept thick dont accept sexy wait for a king to tell u those words mean
nothing
But maybe
Maybe i'm just talkin ya know thinkin out loud
but yall woman truly beautiful and yall should be proud
But most young girls want a thug and not a guy like me
oh well
Maybe one day woman will once again mean something
Please tell me what you think, Feedback needed and appreciated
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You really should persue writing Lyrics...You have the beat down in your poems...I loveit...You have the emmotion as well and that is so important...ANother great write!
Lynda
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This is a great piece. It's nice to know there are men like you out there still.
FallenPoeticAngel
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The meaning in this was wonderful! There are so few good men left. Thank you for writing this =)
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Way to go. I really liked this and it brings up some very good points.
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very strong, continue to refine...
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finally
it's good to know that there are still some men out there like you. this was a very wonderful poem. thank you for putting it out there that women should be proud and that we should not subject ourselves to the shit that some guys like to put some women through. you are going to make someone very happy and they are going to be so lucky to be with you. they just haven't found you yet.
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