Forgive me for,
Holding on too tight,
Forgive me for,
Loving too much,
But baby it's hard,
Not to feel this way with you.
You're just so amazing,
The kind of girl,
Who only comes around,
Once in a life time.
The kind of girl,
You spend forever,
Looking for,
And when you finally,
Do find her,
You never wanna let her go.
So again my angel,
Forgive me for,
Holding on too tight,
Forgive me for,
Loving too much.
So heres my promise to you,
As long as my heart beats,
It'll beat for you,
As long as I breath,
I'll breath.......
To hold you
To love you
To see your smile
To hear your giggle
I'll do anything for you my angel
For my love for you
Is endless
Author notes
Something I wrote for a friend,to give to her girlfriend!! Hope you all like it!!
A contest entry
- Love. by I will stand by you.
600 points, ended October 30, 2007, 14 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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good wrtite.
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Awesome poetry!
I love this poem. Any guy/girl would be lucky to have someone feel this way for them. I know I as a guy would be speechless if anyone ever cared enough about me to write me something like this. I love it. Keep up the great work. I can't wait to read more from you.
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thanks for the comment!!
glad you enjoy it
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Ah this is sweet and you wrote if for someone else. Nice work, and expressed with a lot of love from the heart. Keep the writes coming, my loving daughter!! Thanks for sharing,
CK
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This is Absolutely Beautiful
I think your friend and her companion will love this.
Well enjoyed and well written.
Thanks for sharing this
Ephiphany
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