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No Silent Goodbye

No Silent Goodbye
Cento de tears

Into the silent goodbye eye will not go
Heaven realm has claimed her heart
The earth is hollow and we have touched the sky
Pain of living life as immortal sacrifice
Roses always bloom among the thorns
Love of people not forgotten just ignored
Her man of love was only hollow
Into the silent goodbye she will not go




edited from TEARS of ROSES Poem
new version authorized
  Hollow Man ~ Award Of Excellence ~, broken heart


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made from after reading TEARS of ROSES poem

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  • Deindichter
    August 5, 2007

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    Very interesting reply, lots of good images here, morose as they may be, dark poetry is meant to be, so good job


  • Junesmithster
    August 5, 2007
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    roses as in ONE Tears of Roses always bloom among the THORN as in her hollow ma