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He's The Only One I Care For.

Just months ago we were friends, look at us now;
Eternity came knocking at our doors and took us by surprise.
Summer love has come and brought us into fall,
So many years I've wondered when he would come, when
Everlasting love stuck and left us with each other.

Winding turns and berating paths we'll face, and with each one

I take your hand, in hopes of seeing you take mine back and forever be mine.

Love and trust, I believe in most and as for you, my dearest,

Love me tenderly; to which shows me I know you care.

Inch my inch we slowly step, never taking things further than needed.

A rose for you, that explains my love;

My prince in shining armour hath come for me.

 

For decades to come, I wish you be mine,

Eventually I'll be able to show you how much you mean...

Eventually I can show you how much I love you.

 

Have I ever told you how much I love you?

Always I cherish our moments together as I

Search for new ways to make you happy.

To give you more reasons to fall in love all over again.

I give thee my heart, in hopes that you can fix it... to take care of it

No matter each obstacle, I shall love you forever.

Going the distance to keep you out of harms way... and

Staying forever my golden knight in shining armour. 

A contest entry

Just a poem-like message to the one I adore.

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  • hey charlie
    April 16, 2008

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    Love (or teenage hormones, whichever you're experiencing) is a wonderful thing. I find it's the easiest to write about and often produces the best poems. Your poem was heartfelt but choppy. It didn't flow as well as it should have and there were a few spelling mistakes. It's okay though, I said in the rules that as long as the poem was meaningful, it was all cool. Despite the obvious mistakes I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you for entering.


  • Scarlet Ambrosia
    August 6, 2007

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    hun,
    Its great to see you writing something happy!
    Well This piece is the BEST one I have read from you deary, you have improved somuch when it comes to your poetry, and i am so happy to see this achivement blossom throgh your works!


    love
    mom