Walking under tree,
soothing and surprising rain
falls from blossomed buds.
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Delightful...I love the way you've not only used the words 'soothing' and 'surprising' but also conveyed them by action. The sudden shift from rain to buds is surprising and 'blossomed buds' soothes immensely. Great!
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Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. Duana
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Really nice haiku, Pretty Picture too. Hey that rhymed
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Thanks for entering!
I wish you the best of luck.
I hope you had fun.
-Dlvvanzor (Like my haiku comment for the haiku contest? lol)
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Superb
Very very beautiful writing. You can feel the peace in this work. Wonderful imagery in such a short piece. Well done.
Wayne
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beautiful
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excellent
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Sweet and simple poem I really like the picture too thanks for entering!!
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Wow
great job. This is so beautiful. It give you a great feeling inside. I read some of your other Haikus. I think you have a gift in writing these. You alway convey a truly beautiful picture in short words. But that is the meaning and beauty behind these kind of poems.I think that is deep when can do this because if I can convey something to you two words and it has the meaning of 50. You have done a remarkable feat.Great job and you are talented as you know.
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warm
I get a warm feeling reading this. I like the imagery of blossoms falling like rain. I really enjoyed this piece. -
This is SO BEAUTIFUL! You're imagery is great!
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Thank you. I really love writing haikus. I am so glad you enjoyed it.
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