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Summerland Is Just A TV Show

And for twenty-four hours
I was happy.
And for two hours, on my pink ecstasy pills,
I was so damn in love with you that I thought I would die,
Burning up from the inside,
Blood on fire.
And then I felt the cold, the icy-tone of your words
And the fires were extiguished
And that's when I knew
Summer was at an end.
Winter is here.
Even though it's still hot to the rest of the world,
I'm freezing in your cold-stare.
My blood stopped moving in my veins
My heart can't pump ice.
So I will curl up
And stop breathing
Among your memories of when Summer was here
Hoping that maybe, just maybe, they'll warm me up
And maybe, just maybe, you'll come back
Light up my life
Melt my heart like you always do
Be my Summer forever.
I can't live without you.

~L. J. Arien

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  • Cinta
    August 6, 2007
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    Good

    Love poetry is best when written with emotion. Good one.


  • TwiztidMaggot
    August 5, 2007

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    this is pretty good. I like how you wrote it! good work! keep itup! (summerland... that was a good show... I like Taylor Cole, she's HOTT! lmao!)

    Crimson


    • L. J. Arien
      August 6, 2007
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      thank you! i've actually never seen the show before? lol, i saw it one day while flipping thru the channels.


  • tawk gold member
    August 5, 2007

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    I have never watched Summerland so I don't know what it is about. But your write is so full of wonderful imagery and emotion


    • L. J. Arien
      August 6, 2007
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      thanks, me neither, actually, i just saw the title one day while flipping thru the channels, lol.
      Thank yous!!! <3

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