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You and I

You and I are different
But thats what they say.
And I don't care
But I like it that way.

You and me are one
But still two
And thats OK
But its still the same.

You and I are together
But still apart
And I don't like it
But its not far.

You and me are the same
But they may think against it
and I hate that
But lets show them that we don't care!

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  • LadyLeviathan
    August 7, 2007

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    very cute short poem! please put your name in the AN or write anonymous....great write and thanks for your entry!


  • iamthebeatles
    August 6, 2007
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    grate poem kelsey, but secerisly how could romeo and juliet bore you?!!! I mean i can see juleous cesar being boruing i mean really , war, but secerisly. amazing poem though.
    ps "The End" is playing
    ".....and in the end....the love you take.....is equal to the love...you make............ahhh ahhhhhhhhh "


    • redrumdog31
      August 6, 2007
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      Romeo & Juliet bore me because I already read it once and I don't like to read things twice! thanks for the comment.^^V


  • Beautifully Poetic
    August 5, 2007

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    when reading this, i liked the way you have phrased it!!!

    i like how you say something and then put you feelings towards it like

    You and me are one
    But still two
    AND THAT'S OK!!! <- i dunno its really percuilar but i really liked reading this!!!

    • redrumdog31
      August 5, 2007
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      This write was one of my earlier poems and i was bord and in english reading romeo and juliet that i already read. so yeah thanks for commenting!!
      ^^V

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