She is the Yin to my Yang,
She is the left to my right,
And, she is the Sun on my cloudy day,
But when there's something wrong with her,
A part of me's in pain,
She is the white to my black,
She is the strawberries to my cream,
And, she is the light in my darkest hour,
But if she's not all right,
A part of me's in pain,
She is the day to my night,
She is the positve to my negative,
And, she is the flame on my candle,
But when she's feeling blue,
A part of me's in pain.
Author notes
For my AP twin endless-lover, and, lets all hope she gets out of hospital!! You're an amazing friend Savy!!
"One look from you and I would fall from grace"
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A contest entry
- 8 choices=] by innocence jaded.xx.
300 points, ended September 9, 2007, 30 entries
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Awwww I really loved this one :] Especially the whole comparison thing. Definitely ahmazing and exactly what I was looking for. I can't even pick out what lines I like best ! It's just overall wonderful =]
Thanks for entering and sorry it took so long for me to comment ! I really liked this -
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thatz beautiful!!!!!
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y thank-you!!
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wow sweetie, this is like the best poem i have ever read..!!!!!!5 hundred kisses..!!!!!thanks babe and all is good they just lowered it to one pain killer a day ot 4(lol) thanks great wright mucho loveo...savvy ♥
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Glad you liked it!!
Savvy
oxox
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Awww...so sweet! Best wishes to Savy, I hope she gets better soon, and keep up the awesome work!!
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Well I can't cross anything else so can ya cross your fingers for me hun?? lol
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Aye aye! *crosses fingers, toes and...hair?*
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What a beautiful poem of dedication... I like it! I wish her the best in healing and recovery, and hope she's out soon
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Thanks, I don't know what I'd do without her...
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hay baby girl this was a very sweet a$$ poem here she will love it, babe kisses *gina*
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