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Icicles Opon my Heart

By the hearth,
Quite near the fire,
I sit and shiver.
Because you're a liar.

Let me recap,
about before.
So you are not lost.
Cold nor sore.

When I was with him,
Indeed I was warm.
Safe and sound,
Far from harm.

But to my fault,
I took it too far.
Though he disappeared,
he left a scar.

He said he'd return.
And that he loved me so.
He gave me kiss.
While I said, "Don't go!"

I waited through Spring,
Then summer to fall.
Now it be winter,
My favorite season of all!

I sit and wait,
stiff, cold, and hard.
For the man who loved me,
Who left my heart barred.

I sit and shiver.
Since you kept me warm.
Safe and sound,
So far from harm.

I do not enjoy
Winter at all.
Nor spring or summer,
and especially fall.

I love you.
I want you.
I put it so blunt.
There's nothing to do.

Since you no longer love me.
So here I am by the hearth,
Quite near the fire,
I sit and shiver.
For some fair Sire.




Author notes

Yeah, I know It's not the most understandable. But it is special to me, because I love winter, but for once I did not enjoy it since my mother's death...So I put it in the perspective of two lovers.

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  • KateMadness
    August 5, 2007

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    Wow

    Great job, girl! I love it so much, and some odd reason it makes me think of Jess....o.o Weird...XD
    Anyways, great job on this. You're a great writer!

    ~KORI~


  • Passionate Phoenix
    August 5, 2007

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    very clever, I like it, I enjoyed the discription involved here and mixing the idea of winter and love together is admirable... congrats on a gd write