Our souls aren't made for this machine.
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lately i just keep thinking that this machine we've made for ourselves, this life, all these complications- 5-9 jobs and mortgages and governments and all the things we HAVE to do to survive- we're just not programmed to survive this machine. it wasn't the original plan. we've created a kind of world where no one can thrive.
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- Life is full of one-liners but it's the spaces inbetween that matter most by changeisconstant.
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I so agree the human mind and body cannot keep up. What a thought provoking write. Just amazing



