A red rose is beautiful.
The color is so bright.
The fragrance fills the air
The scent is the light.
Red rose means "Love",
It needs the sun and the rain
to make it grow and grow.
We feel the slightly pain.
The red rose has the sharp
green thorn that pricks
When we touch the rose
that it feel it does stick.
Red rose opens up
and it closes up tightly
The gentle wind blew.
The sun shines brightly.
Please tell me what you think
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I like your poem about red roses! Roses are my favorite type of flowers! Very pretty poem
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Beautiful poem.
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Great imaginative poem! You have elements of several senses in it that makes it delightful (visual--red; feeling--sharp pricks; scent--fragrance; and movement "gentle wind blew. This is a great read--well done!
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Such a beautiful picture you have painted of a red rose. Wonderful imagery and emotions
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Just lovely
I have said it many times before, something magical happens between a poet and a rose. So very soft and gentle. Well done. ~Pamela 
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This is very sweet, Katy. You have made a lovely poem for your red rose. Hugs, Patricia
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