If life is lovely
show me
show me everything
the reason you smile
the meaning of love
but first
tell me what love is
no response?
i'll tell you how to love
you need to appreciate everything
expect the worst
and hope for the best
you need to
love the tender smiles from infant faces
let them warm your heart
melting the ice wall
so see love
simply watch an infant
fall asleep in your arms
they have so much love to give
you just need to accept it
and embrace it
feel it and love it
Now you know what love is
prove it
Author notes
IDK..... it's kinda like at teh end i thought of saying "lets have a baby" hmmm i'm not sure... that seems almost like over-doing it. ^.^ but i'll add if if it's prefered.
A contest entry
- love the smiles-- by Purush.
300 points, ended August 19, 2007, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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...interesting...
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Oh! simply beautiful
Good.
it catches at the soft corners of my heart.
thank you for the entry and I WISH ALL THE BEST -
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I am sooo glad you enjoyed my poem ^.^ I enjoyed writing it very much ^.^
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I would love for someone to prove to me what love is... at least explain it to me. lmao! I don't knwo what it is... and I"m in LOVE lol. ahha. good write! goo dlukc in the contest! (screw fixing my mistakes... sorry.) keep it up!
Crimson
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