Here I sit,
By the lightning tree,
With nothing but nature,
For company,
Here I am,
Alone with my mind,
Relaxed and happy,
Where I can unwind,
I sit on the stile,
Under my tree,
Which has nothing left,
But the trunk you see,
It's quiet and cosy,
And right out of sight,
My imagination,
Can soar like a kite,
I like to sit,
By my lightning tree,
With only nature,
For company,
Where I can dream,
And lie all day,
Where I simply,
Waste my time away.
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A contest entry
- Secret Place by aslanlight.
600 points, ended August 22, 2007, 24 entries
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Beautifully written! I love the rhyme and flow of this!!!! The imagery is fabulous, the thought is so calming! Best of luck in the contest!
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Your imagery is fabulous, this was a wonderful penning and my pleasure to read
~Tia
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Neat and perfectly rounded.
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Sounds relaxing and a such a lovely escape from the hustle and bustle of civilization. I understand not wanting to leave!
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Time not wasted methinks! I used to know a lightning tree but now I've moved and today found a wood where no-one else seems to go. I empathise deeply with this, beautiful!
Thanks for entering
Peace Georgia
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