Sleeping beauty was awaken with a magical kiss,
Away on a white pony they road into a heavenly bliss,
The story should have ended there,
But don't you want to see how well prince charming faired??
Prince charming was a player,
A nasty little sneak,
While sleeping beauty slept,
Up other girls' dresses he would peek.
Sleeping beauty soon found out,
But she kept it to herself,
While prince charming was out cheating,
She went into the kitchen,
And found a black bottle on the shelf.
That night before dinner,
She went back down ahead of time,
With her she brought the bottle,
And put the glasses in a line.
She filled them each with champagne,
One got a special treat,
She set the table accordingly,
Then she arose to her feet.
Running to the kitchen,
To put the bottle back in time,
Nobody can know about her plan,
Her horrible little crime.
Dinner was served and all went well,
The glasses cheered with a clink,
And before the end of the night,
He drank all of his "special" drink.
While walking back upstairs that night,
The room was spinning round,
And soon before he knew what happened,
Prince charming fell to the ground.
A stone cold body,
A hard rock lying in the way,
She let out a shriek of laughter,
At what she'd done that day.
[x]Look who's sleeping now [x]
A contest entry
- [HappyEndingOrJustTheEnd] by whiterabbit..
450 points, ended August 13, 2007, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ♥Drop The Dagger And Lather The Blood On Your Hands, Romeo!♥ by On Frail Wings..
550 points, ended August 25, 2007, 44 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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aww i love this
it rocks hard!
its so fuckin awesome!
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oh wow. this was really fun. ilike it a lot!
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wow, this is great and definitely original. Wonderful job. I love this.
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OMG! This is awesome. I loved it. It was a complete twist on the fairytale...I love those types of poems. This is an exqquisite piece! Best of luck in the contest!
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