A butterfly flutter
gracefully up the air.
The butterfly is happy
that also it is aware.
Then the butterfly
enjoys her short life.
We should enjoy our life,
even though we have strife.
Also, the butterfly
flies away and it's free
from the strifes and problems.
Then it passes by the bee.
We should live our life
the fullest to enjoy
our life that is short
We should feel the joy.
Sometimes we wish
we can be like a butterfly
who has the wings
to just keep fluttering.
Please tell me what you think
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A beautiful poem.
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Nicely-written
Life indeed is short that we need to take time to enjoy. The verses flowed quite nicely. -
Dear Katyv
I love butterflies. Well done. Kudos on a great write.
Hugs and love,
Petratani
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My favorite is the last stanza. I read this to my husband, and he thought it was wonderful.
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Such a beautiful piece! It paints such a beautiful picture of the butterfly...so beautifully expressed...smiles, Terry
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A poem after my heart
I just love the sweet little butterflies...Their soft down like wings and the tickle of their little feet
...Thank you so much for sharing
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I agree with Allamanda ... the third and fourth stanzas are exquisite. There's something very special about a butterfly fluttering its wings ... almost spiritual. xx
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I like the 3rd and fourth stanzas the best.
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