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You

Deep beyond the chasms of darkness
Lies You
Beyond wanting but not beyond caring
Beyond greed but not beyond need
Reach out for the hands that guide you
Look deep into the eyes that light your way
Follow the path of your destiny
You will find your way
In darkness there is light
You are the light
Where there is pain there is healing
You are the healer
In times of desperation
There is hope
Feel your way, feel it, sense it , live it
Deep beyond the chasms of darkness
LIES YOU.

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  • Wayne Leon Learmond gold member
    June 27
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    I like this. Very deep. It brings 'hope' and a sense of positive thought to the reader. Your imagery is good too. Wonderful piece.

    With
    Dark
    Love
    Wayne Leon


  • Lislaine
    April 12

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    Very very very spirtual, I really liked the way you wrote it... its simply amazing written, you surely have a great talent! keep writting...