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I Love You

When I say I love you
It came deep within my heart
It means with you darling
Our life forever start

On the journey of loves perfection
To see the what you see
And feel what you feel
To be you and you be me

Every breath I take
I breathe for only you
Every step I make
You walk with me too

Feeling heaven in your arms
Eternally embrace as one
Sparkling diamonds in our heart
For infinity my love go on

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  • Candy6
    August 10, 2007
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    Very beautiful poem. It rhymes good. That shows your talent.


  • whiterabbit.
    August 5, 2007

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    This is a really beautiful poem. In some places the grammar seems a bit awkward but it doesn't take away from what you're saying. Lovely poem, I really like it.

  • darrylblacksr
    August 5, 2007

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    Great write about undying love it reminds me so my about a poem I wrote a few years back, maybe I will post it. I thank you for sharing this with me and congrats in the contest...