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Delicious Loving

Loving sweetly
slowly, softly;
Tender caresses
saccharine kisses,
beating hearts.
Quickening breaths
desperate exhale
Slick skin
sliding over;
Abrading friction
rubbing, grating;
Wild passions
quickly ignite:
-- ecstasy --
Faster
Harder
-- mindless --
Untamed
Carnal
Eruption!
Mmmm...
Delicious loving.

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  • whiterabbit.
    August 5, 2007
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    Good job. I really like this. A short read just like I wanted. The descriptions are wonderful.