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The Explosion

My feelings for you
are like an explosion

completely out of place
yet snuggled up beside your face

why do humans love
that instant loss of control?

as the searing ball of flames
brands scars within our names

And the force, the concussion
blinds us if only for a moment

as the laws that bind us all
become undefined to let us fall

I guess explosions are

just

        that

                epic.

Who knew brown and yellow
could be so beautiful?

-Well, i didn't-

until your brown eyes etched with yellow
blew apart everything I thought was real.




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