Icy
Clouds
with fluff
morphing into
balls, children
giggling in delight.
Laughter will surround,
schools closed all around,
snowy fun
throughout.
A contest entry
- PIF - 10 People and 10 Lines by Hunger is not Bliss.
300 points, ended August 15, 2007, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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cool. love the background!!!



-slick99
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Well, first of all, thanks. Second, yeah, I put it in the middle because it's supposed to be in the shape of a Christmas tree. -
Wow! Just lovely! The cold temperatures are talked about in such a creative, touching way. I like this. Nicely done

Brian


