Go to her and free your heart,
From hate and spiteful fire,
See yourself with open arms,
Be glad of her desire,
Her love is pure, intentional,
With only eyes for you,
You're worshipped every single hour,
No-one could be more true,
Those footsteps from behind you,
That shadow over there,
Who else would check your well-being,
Letting you know they care?
Don't push away your soul mate,
Don't break the golden chain,
Go to her and free your heart,
Of misery and pain,
She's waited for too long now,
So make her wait no more,
Embrace the raw emotion,
Do not close the door,
See the real person,
Listen to your soul,
She's beautiful so go to her,
Let true love be your goal.
In a list
A contest entry
- Limerence contest anyone? (obsession) by Silence of Finality.
600 points, ended August 12, 2007, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thank you so much for my first trophy and the points. It was a great contest to enter and I really enjoyed writing from someone else's perspective. You've made my day!
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A masterpiece.
This piece was exactly what I as looking for, with good form, flow and feelings. I'm not usually partial to rhyme, therefore with this piece I'm further impressed.
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Thank you so much for the trophy and points. I'm so glad you liked my poem, you've made my day!
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