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Inconsolable

crumbling like the old adobe structure up the road
suffocating by the amount of presences gathered around
searching for the nearest exit
but hopes are dashed when i notice that its blocked
yearning for peace and absolute quiet
i cannot hear myself think
crumpled in a tired heap
so vulnerable in a sea of heartless people & condescending looks
shrinking til i disappear
jotting words down on paper
trying to sort of all my thoughts

Author notes

seeking, solace
Jewels and rickets
gah this is like all my other recent stuff
im sorry hunni
i'll try to come up with something better for you

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  • vampire.lust.death
    November 20, 2007
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    aww its sweet alil hurt but a good heart you must have

  • She Stole My Voice
    August 5, 2007

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    "crumbling like the old adobe structure up the road"
    that line just pulled me in.
    love it.
    Gosh hun
    I hope youre ok.
    I love you sososo much! ♥

    ~Princess of Shadows~